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HGM42
HGM42
1 year ago

Thank you for the translation, you do good work!

That said, hm. This kind of feels like someone read ‘Villainous Husband, the one (…)’ and wanted to create their own version, but wasn’t really a good enough or imaginative enough writer to execute it well instead of taking a roughly similar premise and cramming generic tropes into it.

I think for the character to be this much of an instant-bimbo, the tone of the rest should be a little more energetic and morbid-humor laden. Instead the rest of it seems played totally straight although rather flat, and she simply doesn’t react rationally to anything after a moment’s lip service.